My Introduction——英语初级口语班Yoyo

My  Introduction

     Good evening everybody! It is my great honor to introduce myself here.

     My English name is Yoyo. My last name is Qiu. My first name is Kaihong and my full name is Qiu Kaihong.

     I am from Shanwei city, Guangdong province. I am a belly dance teacher. I work in a fitness club in Guangzhou. I like to wear dresses. My favorite colors are purple and black. I like to eat beef, pork, and chicken.I like to drink orange juice and water, but I dont like to drink tea and coffee. I like sports. I often go for a run on Sundays, but I like golf best.

     Now let me talk about my families. There are seven people in my family. My father is a worker, but he has already retried. My brother is a businessman. He has a good job and his salary is very high. My sister-in-law is a houswife and I have one niece and two nephews. My niece is sixteen years old. She is pretty. My two nephews are fourteen and eighteen years old. They are cute. I like them very much. We are very happy!

得分：95 分       

    评语：这篇自我介绍整体来说写得非常好。从内容方面来讲写的很全面，有涉及到自己的的基本情况，然后分别介绍了自己的爱好和家人以及家人的职业等。语言比较流畅，基本没什么语法错误，并且能够把我们学习到的词和句型运用到作文中来，非常不错。但是要注意like to do sth. 的用法.

学生姓名:  邱凯鸿  (YoYo)

指导老师:  何文芳 (Jenny)