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My Family
My name is Anna. I’m 37 years old . I’m from Meizhou city of Guangdong province. I work as a secretary in the Second Engineering Company Of CCCC Fourth Harbor Engineering Co.Ltd. I’m married and have a lovely daughter. My husband is an engineer; he is 40 years old and from MeiZHou City, too. Our daughter is Angel. She is 13 years old and is a middle school student. She has many hobbies, such as listening to music, reading, dancing and swimming.
We live in GuangZhou City now. It’s a big, modern and beautiful city. We all love it and enjoy the life here. We are very happy every day, and often go to the cinema on weekends.
得分：95分
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学生姓名: 陈志美(Anna)
