所有校区
Escaped on the way
In order to get back the diamonds which were robbed,Mr. Taylor took a taxi to follow the thieves' car. It was worth taking a riderunning after them, it being those in his possession in his life, as a result, hecalled the police for the thieves escaped on the way happened to have a trafficjam, chased by the policemen and like "A rattle snake will bite its own tailif it is cornered!" , they had to abandon their car to ran with theirshock, no sooner had they gone than a car at tremendous speed hit one of them,who carried a bag of diamonds. As soon as they were picking up the diamonds, theywere arrested. They were shouting loudly in a crazy way, whereas it did notwork, it's too late to learn. Maybe this "If you commit a crime, you cannever escape being punished!" After reading the article, if you were they,what would you do?
——曹要峰
老师点评：该生写作多用主从复合句、主被动语态、三大非谓语动词(不定式，动名词和分词)、介词短语、倒装、独立主格结构、省略、修辞手法和惯用句型表达，并且注意理论和例证以及名言引用相结合，实现了标点符号的多样化。
